Spugly Fuglet Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 A Splintered God [2006] A mark hit Sheep at sleep Babies hold Wind blowing Voices keen Many a body unseen, In a Childs scream, A boy’s drink, A woman walk, A sun rising, A day ending, Such a god in silence tending, Shadows cats, Numbers moved Smells of wood Books falling, A soul seeing Such a lost god no more a being ©InSightFull.ltd Stars rushing Worlds spin Lights expand Its all holding On the path trod We hold in our lives a splintered god Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 please post more poetry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRedQueen Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 the whole essense in each of the pieces, fractal in design, the holographic universe, groovy dude, really groovy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 please post more poetry! I totally agree SB. I was trying to think of a clever response to his poem but didn't want to be lame and just say, "hey, nice poem" cuz I feel it deserves more than that. I really liked this one, the premise, the words, the tempo..... Brilliant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melrich Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 Excellent work Spugly. Agree with SB, like to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 It's not just nice, but you also get the feeling that it looks like it's happening due to the very powerful words on it!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 i know what you mean, Ailec. splendid imagery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted July 12, 2006 Author Share Posted July 12, 2006 Thank you for your kind words every one, i will try to post more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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