AwdreeHpburn Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 The chill how it lingers The dust how it blows It freezes your fingers It dirties your toes Where a penguin lives its dirty and its cold but what a penguin gives is a gift you should behold I love my waddling friends who carry babies on feet I hope it never ends The penguin life is sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 how kyoot!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 Sweet. Reminds me of Danny DeVito Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 11, 2006 Author Share Posted July 11, 2006 lol - Danny DeVito? Thanks guys, I feel like being silly today.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 image removed As the Penguin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 Very creative poem for your avatar!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 11, 2006 Author Share Posted July 11, 2006 RFLMAO Dako - Ohmigoodness!! That's a bit darker than where I was going but we can go there too.... Removing the wings of a penguin and the fate of a baby seal the distortion of breathing life from the cradle a youngen to steal Pull the wings off for collection pin them with needles for display the pain inflicted is glorious as it is never me that will pay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dako Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 Truly a grisly work, Ta. Charming! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 11, 2006 Author Share Posted July 11, 2006 Come on, don't be sarcastic. Explore your dark side.... -kidding Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 that second entry is simply poopyesque. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 that second entry is simply poopyesque. You're funny on most of your posts Slightylybent, LOL, dunno why!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
now_better Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 i believe penguins would approve of this poem. =D> image removed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 I like both entries. Short sweet, and fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 13, 2006 Author Share Posted July 13, 2006 thanks ForAnother, i take that as a big compliment coming from a poet such as yourself.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 thanks ForAnother, i take that as a big compliment coming from a poet such as yourself.... Hmmm. That sarcasm? heh... -ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 13, 2006 Author Share Posted July 13, 2006 Hmmm. That sarcasm? heh... -ForAnother wha ??? No, I just read your poems. I really like your poetry and feel flattered that a poet of YOUR calibur commented positively on mine. I was/am being very serious....I know I'm sarcastic quite often, but this time I actually meant it.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 Well im flattered, and actually laughing on this side of the computer. Thank you! -ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 Now all you people making me laugh!!!!!! Yet, I don't get the joke, LOL!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 this is why I love happy poetry. Rare on eNotalone -ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted July 13, 2006 Author Share Posted July 13, 2006 this is why I love happy poetry. Rare on eNotalone -ForAnother True dat! I was in a silly mood..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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