hazeleyed Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 The night so beautiful, so fresh so sweet As I take off my slippers and walk bare feet The moon is shining while everything else is dark As my feet touch the sand I feel the coldness of the sand The warm summer wind blows at my face As I stop to fix my hair I look upon the stars While the moon shines as bright as your eyes The stars twinkle upon me like a guiding light The sound of waves hitting the rocks seems so peaceful It truly feels as if I am in heaven I close my eyes and picture us happy As I go deeper into the reflection I also remember the fights As I lift my eyes up to the sky I knew God was giving me courage inside Once again I see a picture of you and softly wish you goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PRSOV Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 That is an amazing piece of writing. Thank you for sharing with us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 Wonderful structure in the words!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
model_heather Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 I am printing this and taping it in my car. I absolutely LOVE IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevin T Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 That's an excellent poem. I creates a very vivid mental picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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