The_Vacancy Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 My favourite so far. It reflects so much on real problems in my life that it was easier to get the ideas oiut and right it. I really like this one. Just because I can relate to it, I have used alot of differant words and so on. ***** Last time I forfeit the fight It scored scars kisses couldn't heal She says it didn't matter Band-aids cover sore-spots Wounds won't have to be revealed In sleeping motions The tick over of my hearts rotation, Revived me alive and, Even as she hushed me with her - Lullaby lines, sweet rhymes She couldn't cover her cute alibis Fights never made the blues right And as she ushered me her dreams Well, I cried the pain away Everything I thought of still seemed To make the pain boldly gleam I swayed prays in every way Begging the routine dreams to replace The real life nightmares - That I faced every time I tried Well, every time I cried When we move in, we fight it out Fragment disposition complicating it Band-aids hide sore-spots But covering the wounds Only antagonise the bleeding seams And prolong pain Oh, the memories of apologies Taking blame has never been so simple And pain hasn't been so ample I'm sorry, I send an - Apology of being apathetic I should never have Fallen asleep This wound wouldn't be Cutting it deep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 Ah, I like the use of the words, it's a romantic poem!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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