The_Vacancy Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 If I was sure In wanting ends to waiting I've been decorating The last-night promises Of a shaking mouth In desperate moments I discovered And I recovered Days I've been wanting I spent waiting In towering darkness I cried for the night Fingers use - Tears for abuse I wrote my heart out Tonight Made it seem almost Right It seems right To create a scene tonight She knows - I've been in search To calm a day under emotion But in a search She finds it first I won't mind If my tattered emotions Are beaten In building darkness I search a night Slow moving hands in use Tears for abuse She takes everything I gain nothing I'm sorry That I allowed you to take me Rip me down Spin me around I'm so… I'm very… In every way… Sorry… ***** This one was harder because it was more or less true to some extent. All of mine are true, just exaggerated but this one was for some reason particularely hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 That one is a clever poem, you should be a poet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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