Daddy Bear Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 © Hear No Evil Music Goddess, will you grant me water? nothing to sustain me on this cold forsaken rock mane is matted, nearly snowblind, staring at Antarctica lay me at your feet that i may ward your danger off shipwrecked with my crew and Captain crouching by their signal fires, all were built in vain one by one i had to take them, cold would kill them soon enough i was only sparing them the slow advancing pain if i fall before you reach me let my body serve you well take my skin and let me hold you warming you beneath my pelt Goddess, now the storm approaches! lonely sanctuary has become my killing floor i can but beseech you as i sink unto the frozen stones keep my head upon your starry wall forevermore take my spirit to your bosom perfume sweet against my fur feel my soul as i enfold you remnant of a warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 Fantastic word usage, esp. the differences in fonts, makes the poem clearly and understandable!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRedQueen Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 Sacrificial lamb loves woman to the core. Slightly better than the last one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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