For her - wherever she is

[Casket]

I wrote this poem in the last 10 minutes, i just threw everything onto paper without looking back. Heres what came out of it.

 

I remember the night when we first met,

The magic in late november.

The smile on your face, the look in your eyes,

The night you would remember.

 

You were once my pillar of strength,

You were once my all.

How could we have let love persish,

My demise and my downfall.

 

You were the woman who lit up my world,

The princess from the tale.

You picked me up when i fell down,

I thought love would prevail.

 

Yet here i am all alone,

As I stare up at the sky.

7 months on i think of you,

How could you have let me die?

 

Past all the barricades, and all the walls,

Through heaven and hell i ran,

But you did not appreciate it,

Thats when my pain began.

 

And you would think that after all this time,

That id be moving on.

Yet still i sit here unsurpassed,

As i sing this untold song.

 

So this last poem i write for you,

In honour of lost love.

I know that we will meet again,

At the pearly gates above.

 

So this for you, wherever you are,

The only think ive known,

I hope your happy, i hope your loved,

For me - i am alone.

[evyrew]

Wow... that really hits home for me...

 

Thank you

[Daddy Bear]

pretty impressive for a ten-minute work!

[Casket]

Thanks for both of your comments.

 

It was one of them sporadic occourances in which you just need to get everything of your chest.

[yeawutever]

Wow how did you come with such idea in only 10 minutes, guess you're a poet afterall!!!!!!!!!