neva_black_n_white Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 itd be so easy to blame - everything on you over and out done and through but lets not be selfish even after this - you dont deserve for the world to be crushed once love to be unheard our relationship was beautiful god it made me smile fair enough you burnt me and my heart stang for a while but you were my everything i wouldnt take it away push me back 3 years id live it the same way because you gave me happiness a whole lot of times through i wouldnt be me now if there wasnt ever you people make it sound simple how a relationship burns at one end lets be honest with each other the pain equally ascends so dont tell me its all their fault even if theyve done wrong there must have been something you did to let it come along if love was meant to be im sure it would happen but its not all about the pretty picture its one hell of a confusing pattern ................................................ i was gonna continue but the whole point is x relationships are meant to be 50/50. my boyfriend hurt me like. i dont know. horrendously bad. BUT im pretty sure, infact i know. I could have done alot more to avoid that. Maybe... Maybe someone is perfect and it wasnt there fault. BUT relationships are 50/50... work the rest out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 another great poem that i could really sink my teeth into. keep 'em coming Neva! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 Teehee x thankyou spud (not literally of course *smiles*) x inspired by a little someone on here... called mystery person X ... giggles... glad you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Love it. You should get published Neva... you've a beauty comes through your pen. Or should I say keyboards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 Thanks x I do try. *giggles* Just had to be said *winks* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 That's a beautiful poem, by the way don't let one guy get you depress, you're too full of life to be worrying about that particular loser. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 itd be so easy to blame - everything on you Its always easy to point fingers at the other person. That way we don't have to look into the mirror and take responsibility for our actions. Thing is... when we do this, we don't learn the lesson and we continue to make the same mistakes in subsequent relationships. but lets not be selfish even after this - you dont deserve for the world to be crushed once love to be unheard This one gets me... because as above, why throw the baby out with the bath water... YOU LOVED deeply at one time. Lets be adults here and say we've come to an impasses.. a fork in the road... and we as a couple can't continue. Don't make a mockery of the beautiful thing there once was. I think its EGO and pride. If a relationship is NOT right for one person... its no longer a relationship. If two can not come to an accpetable compromise they can both live with... why torture each other? and why make a mockery of the good times. but you were my everything i wouldnt take it away push me back 3 years id live it the same way because you gave me happiness a whole lot of times through i wouldnt be me now if there wasnt ever you I like this... because I do believe people come to you for a reason, a season or a life time. I don't regret my failed marriage... I am the woman I am today for the lessons that I have learned. Yeah... I could have done a little less with the pain, however the most valuable lessons are hard one... and the Wisdom gained precious. people make it sound simple how a relationship burns at one end lets be honest with each other the pain equally ascends EXACTLY... nothing is black and white. There are many shades of gray and to those on the outside things may look simple. Why? No emotional involvement and the perception is different. There is NO DOUBT in my mind that both parties in the couple go through the PAIN of severing the relationship. BUT.. its always the one who is "dumped" that feels like they carry the biggest burden. Quite possilby the dumper has already processed the grief.. however, they grieve no less. so dont tell me its all their fault even if theyve done wrong there must have been something you did to let it come along Accpeting responsibility for ones actions. That is a difficult thing to do. Humbling. We all make mistakes and there's a reason for every choice we make. Sometimes we really screw up because we make flash decisions. Its ok... we're human. if love was meant to be im sure it would happen but its not all about the pretty picture its one hell of a confusing pattern THIS is very very true. Its not all about the glitz and the glamour or all the stirring of emotion that we feel at the beginning of the relationship. When it gets down to brass tac's what it comes down to is... entrusting the other person with our lives and our ego's... hearts or whatever you would call it. TRUST... HONESTY.... and there can be no LOVE if you do not trust your partner... or if one of you has been dishonest. None. Maybe I'm jaded and thats something I HAVE to work through... I just don't have time for BS... I don't want to have to second guess or question. Hey... thanks for the POEM... grin... very good.. it struck a chord with me and made me think.. and THAT is the sign of a good piece of writing. ................................................ i was gonna continue but the whole point is x relationships are meant to be 50/50. my boyfriend hurt me like. i dont know. horrendously bad. BUT im pretty sure, infact i know. I could have done alot more to avoid that. Maybe... Maybe someone is perfect and it wasnt there fault. BUT relationships are 50/50... work the rest out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Vacancy Posted July 7, 2006 Share Posted July 7, 2006 Very powerful, I really enjoyed it. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 smiles at shadows light. hehe. that was beautiful. you put in all the right words to explain the metaphor. thankyou. im glad it was interpreted right. hehe. thankyou everyone else for the comments... smiles muchly. i appreciate them. neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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