dpressedone89 Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 you were the light upon my stage illumintating my latest tragedy only you can show beauty in my life and your are the beauty the one thats keeping me alive I want to hold your perfect hand but its a million miles away and your the sparkle in my eye now my eyes are neon green and i will walk the million miles eliminate the in between your lips and mine forever on this night Id give anything just to hold you to feel your breathe on my neck to hold you through the night. -stitcheS yes horrible poetry i am aware but its one of those things i cant keep inside any commnets? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 No thats really good, i loved it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 im glad to hear it, thats so kind of you. thank you -stithceS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 No thank you for sharing your poem with all of us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 no problem, too bad im afraid to share it with the person i wrote it for lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 you should show her im sure she will love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 i would but she'd probably think im a loser, we met on here and havent met face to face and we used to be totally in love but i dont think she feels it that way anymore, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NKP Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 She wont think your a loser i promise, show her it and then se might show you how she feels about you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 ill show her but i dont know what to do if she doesnt feel the same, i mean i respect her decision but i have been completely head over heals, think about her everynight and day since we met Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 No it's not horrible, the words on it are clever!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted July 6, 2006 Share Posted July 6, 2006 Babe, it's pretty. You're so much better than you think, and not just at writing, okay? -E. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 7, 2006 Author Share Posted July 7, 2006 Babe, it's pretty. You're so much better than you think, and not just at writing, okay? -E. you really liked it? but you've seen some of the thing i wrote that didnt suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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