Slacker Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 One of two poems i've ever written, tell me what you think (please be gentle) -Dreamtime I dreamt a dream to set me free but now these dreams imprison me, my hopes and fears and uncried tears render me blind after all these years, these fantasies they have me bound screaming, praying to be found. you see- many dreams i'll dream tonight i'll share this one it's broken the flames of hell cast all earths light our world is scorched and smoking is this the dream that will come true? a short walk down a path of empty rue, cause it may be the only dream i would ever share with you. I was a little angry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Lovely poem, was it dedicated to something/someone special or just written in general?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coollady1957 Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 You certainly have a way with writing. I had to stop and take a deep breath while reading that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slacker Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 Thanks a bunch for the input, i wrote it while an ex was trying to reintroduce herself into my life..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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