hazeleyed Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 When I saw you for the first time I believed things would be great As months passed we got closer and closer What I didn't realize was the lies you told me over and over again The random phone calls on your phone, the messages on your computer Whenever I would ask you would make up an excuse and I would take it like a fool Until one day I got up and called the number back to hear a girl pick up on the other end I couldn't believe you had cheated, I didn't dare think you would hurt I should have known you were hiding Yet I trusted something inside those big blue eyes 2 years later I wonder why I let you affect my life so much When all you had given me was pain and deceit When all that came out of your mouth was lies after lies Why was it so hard to just let it all go and smile for once You had stolen my heart You had stolen my laugh All I did now was cry and cry until I fell asleep I walked alone and had become a joke to the world Until one day I just decided to end it all and took the pills and prayed for my call That night I closed my eyes and whispered a final goodbye Link to comment
AntiLove_SuperStar Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 No one is worth suicide over. Link to comment
hazeleyed Posted July 3, 2006 Author Share Posted July 3, 2006 Your right, but the sad part is some do it. Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 Never attempt ending your life cuz of a failed relation, not worth, there's always more to life than just being in a relation. Link to comment
shelly7 Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 Great poem! You really capture the emotion of being cheated on. Keep writing! Link to comment
coollady1957 Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 Until one day I just decided to end it all and took the pills and prayed for my call That night I closed my eyes and whispered a final goodbye That above is the sad part ,,,,,when people are so distraught they actually end up taking their own lives sometimes. Certainly no one is worth taking your life over and life must go on. I actually can identify with the poem, UP UNTIL THOSE LAST TWO LINES. I never once was so distraught to consider something that drastic. However, I had every other thought and emotion in the poem, when I was lied to and cheated on Link to comment
yeawutever Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 Still dont' quite understand why many people will think about ending their lifes just cuz of a bad relation. I mean isn't there more to life than getting into a relation, how about your family, your job (if you're working), or your career if you're studying, paying for your income taxes, your morgage, bills, clubs, activitties, etc... then be thinking "Oh my soulmate mate, oh I'm nothing without him/her". Link to comment
hazeleyed Posted July 4, 2006 Author Share Posted July 4, 2006 I agree with all of you. But I wrote those feeling really down and upset. Its different to feel things than to act on them. Link to comment
hazeleyed Posted July 4, 2006 Author Share Posted July 4, 2006 Great poem! You really capture the emotion of being cheated on. Keep writing! Thanks shelly! I really didnt think anyone would find these poems good...but thank you for appreciating them. Link to comment
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