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Goodbye Goodnight [A Sadder Poem I Think]


The_Vacancy

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One of my sadder ones, it might not seem so but it was actually hard even to write it.

 

Just about how I have had so many oppertunities and chances at talking to the girl I like, or having the chancesat succeeding in a class I wanted to succeed in but eventually giving up in trying. Basically trying to tell myself not to say goodbye to charisma and confidence and everything inside of me. Hard to explain.

 

Dear Miss Charisma

Wherever did you go?

I've fought the winds alone

Without you, I feel oh-so

I feel oh-so low

 

Trustworthy confidence kid

Break to me a smile

From you, anything's everything

Forever goodnight seems

Almost worthwhile

 

This gash is opening

 

As insanity brushes outbreak

Never say goodbye

And as I blister, as I break

Never will you cry

Don't say goodbye

 

(Please…)

 

And as our holding hands

Slowly lose one another

Promise to me (Please…)

We can take on the weather

Take it on together

 

Goodbye, goodnight

 

And dear Miss Charisma

Show me some practicality

I never meant the things I said

So tell me I'm not guilty

 

Please, oh please confidence kid

Hold on to my hand

Don't ever say goodnight

Never say goodbye

A fight won't make this right

 

Goodbye, goodnight

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It's a very nice peom and eys it is a little sad, that's what makes it so creative too. By the way don't be shy when talking to the girl you like, go for it, if you get rejected, move on and go to next one. Rejection is better than not knowing an answer to something.

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