The_Vacancy Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Barely a poem. More like the "crummy ideas that swell in my head that I can't write down cause they're difficult and I don't know where to put them so they sit there in my pad and waste space until I finally write a messy flow of all of the ideas and words in one big messy pile." type of thing, you know? And so this is how it goes This is what it feels like To be used To be the abused And this, this is what it's like To be bleeding And bruised At living life - You seem to be amused Swear you couldn't be You wouldn't be The one living this nightmare A love affair With the bullet It slides through the head Panic oozes - Loveliness drips red I'm ten steps ahead So this is what is happening Dreaming dreams Fragment memories broken Indefinitely outspoken World spinning Your face breaks Loveliness falling Occupying the clubs reserve Momentum stalling Swear you had a good run But it must end now Every single way It ends today And so forever goodnight We wish to be right But drama Drama caves in And further we slide We tried, we tried This dark world This sharp life It robs us blind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dpressedone89 Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 I like it. technically speaking its awesome, you can feel energy from reading it.it could be a song. good job. -stitcheS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 Very nice poem, good word of the words!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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