neva_black_n_white Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 questions often arise in which you expect me to be perfect you have an ideal responce ready lets be logical its not worth it you ask me if im an angel and give me a look as if to say you want me to respond with "im perfect" but its obviously not that way so i take a minute to think of an answer that would satisfy you but being so perfect like you want me to be wouldnt lying be a crime to do? but still i concoct a story tell you of how much of a saint i am theres nothing negative about me im the lady for every man i mean, lets be logical and think for a minute how rational that statement is since when have you found an angel upon which earth was where she lived? but still you take it in your stride and smile back with a hopeful glee what a fool i am becoming loosing track of the persons thats me i dont mean to be a devil but im deffinitley not a saint yet i seem to give answers that satify how long till you notice, this is a person i aint? if you wanted me to be honest the perfect girl to be then youd listen to my answers youd respect me for me im nothing close to amazing not even a patch on good im more likely to be at the gates with the devil a best friend if i could only if were going to make speculations the direction your heading is wrong im manipulating and lying and convincing the lyrics to a sorry song Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arwen Posted June 27, 2006 Share Posted June 27, 2006 I like what you wrote here, and I think a lot of the verses could actually be lyrics to a song. Ilse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 27, 2006 Author Share Posted June 27, 2006 smiles ** thanks. ill see who i can pass it onto... jokes and giggles x neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 28, 2006 Share Posted June 28, 2006 Yea, very creative poem, all the words connect with each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted June 28, 2006 Share Posted June 28, 2006 "not even a patch on good"--that is an AWESOME line! i think that a lot of girls could benefit by reading this poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 28, 2006 Author Share Posted June 28, 2006 thanks ailec hehe x its weird, i didnt feel like i had to try with this poem. i just wanted to get it off and make a point of what's real. maybe thats why it seems to work. slightlybent... what can i say, blunt but true, blunt but true ill rally the ladies lol x i doubt many would own up but .. still. neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 How did I miss this one....its brilliant. AND I'll be the 1st to step up to the plate...an ANGEL I am not. You'll more likely to find me dancin with the devil himself. Grin. There's a saying I like... "Good Girls never made history" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 LOL. what a fabulous saying. hehe. Im glad weve got a little bit of a club going here, didnt want to be the only open corrupted girl. giggles** thanks neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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