Haven Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 if i left you a flower i know you wouldn't take it because i left it out there and you left me out here and now there's nothing left but the falling rain that's hardening into ice now. if you wanted me back i would say no no, i would say yes (NO) i would take back my flower i would take back my hand i would leave you because this ice it really hurts you know? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 Creative poem, was it dediacted to someone special?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brando Posted June 23, 2006 Share Posted June 23, 2006 i do like the last lines of the first stanza better than the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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