AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 18, 2006 Share Posted June 18, 2006 Laying down, All alone, Wishing you were here. Knowing that i shouldn't, Yet tempted by my fear. Slowly rising, Getting up, Reaching for the blade. Longing never to touch it, But scared the pain won't fade. Was it wrong to wish for you? Was it wrong to ask? Was it wrong to cry for you? Was it wrong not to last? Now i lay here, All alone, Holding the blade in my hand. There never used to be no tears, I never felt any fears. Yet i'm lying here tonight, Asking no more questions, Just looking back at life, Wishing for no more answers, Just wanting the chance to have a good life. Laying down, All alone, Wishing you were here. apologies... i did, Over run by fear. Risen tall, Already up, Already held the blade, Longing i hadn't touched it, Sorry the pain never did fade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
polo Posted June 18, 2006 Share Posted June 18, 2006 too sad but very nice .. am feelin it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 18, 2006 Author Share Posted June 18, 2006 lolz i know i gotta like make myself happy Geez i swear im actually a crazy happy person... This is just my way of expressing all the stupid ideas that run through my head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
polo Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 lolz i know i gotta like make myself happy Geez i swear im actually a crazy happy person... This is just my way of expressing all the stupid ideas that run through my head hehe .. glade to hear that..and ur way of expressing is pretty good and no its not a stupid ideas ... the funny thing that i write poems too but only when am in a bad mood never wrote while am happy, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 19, 2006 Author Share Posted June 19, 2006 lolz i know how you feel... I do the same thing! Poetry never comes out right when i'm happy so i guess its a good thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Vacancy Posted June 22, 2006 Share Posted June 22, 2006 Well done Rozi!, I like this poem. It's realistic and differant. =] Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 24, 2006 Author Share Posted June 24, 2006 Thanks i guess its realistic cuz i know the pain of tempation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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