I don't see .....

[neva_black_n_white]

I don’t see how you can anticipate

The results to a game that hasn’t yet been set

I don’t see how you can predict a loss

When you haven’t yet met

 

I don’t see how you can predetermine the destiny

To something that cant be defined

I don’t see how you can set a course

Let alone when the course is mine

 

I don’t see how you can anticipate a reaction

When you haven’t yet given something to react to

I don’t see how you can manipulate and create all these situations

All to achieve what you want to do

 

But I do know its because I let you

Leave another to slip by

I can see it’s the way I chose the road to take

All this to keep you by my side

 

But I know that that’s because I believe

And I cling onto what you say

I have hope in your words of “I love you”

Because I have trust that you wouldn’t lie

On THOSE words that you say

[lunatic]

Neva I have edited your poem just as I have PM'd back to you. I hope this is what you wanted.

[neva_black_n_white]

Smiles* thanks hubman01. Thats really amazing of you. alot of consideration to actually do it. *smiles* ITS PERFECT... smiles.thankyou *very big smile with appreciation*neva x

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thats awesome neva! Every time i come on here you always have a new post up so i get to read more of your great poetry! I still think you should teach me lolz! Anways just keep writing cuz its all so inpirational and i love it!

[neva_black_n_white]

smiles* thanks. hehe. ive reread it and im not sure on how it sounds but i still like what its getting accross.. hehe. thankyou *big smiles*