neva_black_n_white Posted June 6, 2006 Share Posted June 6, 2006 looking into the eyesof those who drain lifefrom others who only tryto succeed at what they dream forlistening to the wordsof a man who struckdeaf the remarkable beingwho created rhythm to soundtouching the handsof him who removedall dignity that lyeupon the innocents entiritysmelling the odourof he who took awaya smell that captureda moment that passedsenses conquered and overwhelmedby the controlanother can maintainover those who let them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 6, 2006 Author Share Posted June 6, 2006 this was in verses... four lines... but i dont think the site really appreciated it for some reason... i tried altering and re-entering the spaces and everything where they needed to be.. but no luck. sorry neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 It's ok, I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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