blu87ro Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 Look into my eyes and tell if you see The fire that burns deep inside of me , Please don’t walk away so soon It’s not even half past moon. Stay and I’ll share with you The sky,the see and all the blue. My sleepy dreams,my vivid illusions And maybe my dark disillusions. Just let me be on your side this time My love doesn’t cost a thing,not even a dime. Give me one chance and I’ll find the ways To wake you up from the frozen daze. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 Nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! By the way, is it dedicated to someone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
demons-princess Posted June 12, 2006 Share Posted June 12, 2006 very very nice im inpressed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 I really like your poem, its been a long time since ive seen a ab, ab rhythm going on. i like it. different to others.. smiles** nice work. neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted June 15, 2006 Share Posted June 15, 2006 I read that a little while ago but i forgot to comment so i thought i would today Anywayz its a great poem and its so true! True emotions are what makes poetry good and you used them well! love alwayz rozi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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