neva_black_n_white Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Screams of passion Hedge bets destined to lose Compared to those Of screams of hate The source of pain That lays in your touch The source of anger A place I start to look - It's the satisfaction Of your manipulation I begin to realise What I enjoy It's the disruption Corruption Humiliation Of me being your toy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 24, 2006 Author Share Posted May 24, 2006 Wanting you to want me Is something I don't need It's the greed of loving someone you cant have Where I begin to feed It's the passion of disruption It's the tainted emotion that's there It's the feeling of being manipulation - A source who has no care Its knowing your taking something That doesn't belong to you Its knowing that your not meant to But who cares-you enjoy it too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 24, 2006 Author Share Posted May 24, 2006 Theres no longer that look on your face No longer that tainted smile Theres no longer the passion in your cuddles And theres been no emotion for a while Theres no longer that cheekyness in the tone of your voice No longer that the secret behind a shared joke Its as though were like every one else Just me a gal and you any another bloke Theres no longer that shared attraction No longer a loving fight Theres no longer the sunshine to this relationship Every day is as dark as night Theres no longer a kiss with emotion No longer a touch that could make me scream Theres no longer a passion that I long Its as though this light doesn't beam ……………………………………………………………………………………………… (not finished simply because the situation hasn't either) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Nice poems!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 25, 2006 Share Posted May 25, 2006 oooo i liked them all neva! I want your talent! All threee of them used words so well. You certainly have a way with them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 25, 2006 Author Share Posted May 25, 2006 thanks guys *smiles* hadnt written anything in a while so felt a lil surge of energy *giggles* i writ them all at the same time.. who knows what the overall collection means. eeek neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Serendipity1607307077 Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 Absolutely beautiful poetry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 thanks... i think youll find thats the effects of a man. smiles x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFallenShadow Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 very interesting indeed, would like to see how the rest of the poem plays out. very well written.. Fallen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 9, 2006 Author Share Posted June 9, 2006 smiles* thanks. i doubt it will end. its a bit of an up, down, stop, start sort of thing at the minute... maybe ill add a few when it feels right! x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Vacancy Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 I like your use of words, Neva. You've got exceptional talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted June 13, 2006 Author Share Posted June 13, 2006 thanks. smiles** cant say theres anything too special about the words themselves, its just what you get when you put down how you feel.but thanks. hehe. i really appreciate it. i noticed you have some stuff on here, might take a look. smiles.thanks for the comment me x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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