BlueWolf Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 Very first poem written by me. It's all true too. As I was sitting in bed listening to music, I thought about these things. After a long day Lying on my bed, tired, exhausted I got in touch with a lesson lost Listening to music gave me the inspiration And the power to think more deeply I thought of myself and the people around me Why am I not happy? Why do I need so much? That, however, was the dreaded confusion Much was not needed, just vague smile or a touch Of people who share your interest more or less Remember the unique people? The ones that made you feel As if you were flying through the day? Remember last December? She made it go by so fast… Remember that Friday? When you felt you should not even be in that building? (That place was empty, boring… boring!) Destiny was literally right around the corner, you didn't even realize it All at once, you wanted to be nowhere else. Your luck Remember the other few vague occasions? Hope put you back on your feet It was her, not some stranger At that moment, you felt instantly stronger Remember? You were unique to others too But no – you wanted more than just them Someone unique to YOU You wanted to pick and choose Happiness then was nowhere to be found for you Three times in the last six months I felt true happiness I felt as if I could not fall… just keep going! And it was with my unique people Not just friends, or those interested in me My unique people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 Very creative poem there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueWolf Posted May 24, 2006 Author Share Posted May 24, 2006 Thanks... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueWolf Posted May 24, 2006 Author Share Posted May 24, 2006 Wow, the irony of it all. Today our assignment is to write a poem for English that expresses who we are. Technically I could turn this in, but it is a little off-topic. It's good practice to prepare me for the one I'll be writing today though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueWolf Posted May 25, 2006 Author Share Posted May 25, 2006 This is the one for tomorrow. I took the first stanza and left it the same, and I changed the rest of it: After a long day Lying on my bed, tired, exhausted I got in touch with a lesson lost Listening to music gave me the inspiration And the power to think more deeply Days are like mental obstacle courses Each is unique and poses a different challenge Sometimes it seems as if Murphy’s Law is at its best Other times it seems as if destiny comes out of nowhere There right by you, with a little hope to guide you ahead (Putting your fears to rest) And you also see other’s daily journeys Be it their luck or misfortune There is no room for jealousy or intimidation There is no room for celebration There is only room for you to learn, to grow, to become independent I never understood people’s superficial thinking Of how one looks, talks, walks Or even how one embarrasses himself It all never really seemed to matter much to me For it’s all just part of life, you see Too many are absorbed with that which is not important Not noticing, they lose their grip of reality Not noticing, they no longer notice true morality Trying to find quick satisfaction That fails to turn to prolonged happiness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 25, 2006 Share Posted May 25, 2006 I like them both! They are both great but the second i understand more because of personal history i suppose. But yes please keep writing! Your poems are quite differt to what i normally read and write myself and i like that! It put a new sort of perspective on things! So thankyou! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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