neva_black_n_white Posted May 21, 2006 Share Posted May 21, 2006 So hard to read Let alone between the lines I cant make out the letters But I know were not fine Its more in the things - That you chose not to say It's the way you pick to stand And speak a different way I don't need any tips No hints on what to do All I need is your eyes To know that this is through Everyone thinks that words Are the be and end all But sometimes you don't need those To know you're in for a fall It's the look on someone's face It's the nature they're in It's the way they approach you And the visible sins It's the camouflaged tears And screams that are silent It's the gray in the sky And now the rainbows not vibrant It's the heart that doesn't feel And veins that don't bleed It's the truth that you corrupt And the lies you now feed It's the food that's tasteless And sight took away Its standing by someone When you don't want to stay Its taking away sound When listening to a favorite song Its trying to be with someone When you know you don't belong Its breaking up dreams That haven't been dreamt It's your manipulation For you, well worth spent. ---------------------------------------------------------- not sure about the last verse x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q10 Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 thanks for sharing another one of your nice poems with us oh and, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 lolz i agree happy birthday and thanks againfor an awesome poem! I've realised you were right. If you write from your heart and don't try to hard thats when a good piece of poetry is formed. It doesn't matter what people think its what you think yourself. Thankyou so much for posting these poems because each time i read them i become stronger in myself and i don't know how or why but thankyou! love always rozi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 22, 2006 Author Share Posted May 22, 2006 Aww thanks guys. ultra smiles, ive been away all weekend for an extra spesh birthday and i havent lifted a finger, was well swarve hehe. but thankyou. rozi!!!! hows it going? i do like your lil responces, i dont know what id do if i came and never had a reply from you... gives you a little piece of her heart proper smiles at what you writ** thanksyou love neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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