chuck norris Posted May 20, 2006 Share Posted May 20, 2006 i posted this else where not realising there was a poetry section so have copied and pasted it.... have now sent the second poem and it hit the spot.. hey... just though i would share what i have managed to write while in my situation.. im about to go meet up with some one the other side of the world i have been chatting online with for over a year. and this is what i managed to write in the mean time.. i sent this one already.. We are so far apart yet so near, I feel us get closer every time I hear, Things about me, the way that you feel, Erotic thoughts I want you here!! The words flow with ease Her name is Tani, she is so dear For you I want to please Would you want to be here!! This I write full of joy Hehe as I giggle, like a school boy, Thoughts of the future my insides cheer Im getting scared of being here!! Im stuck in a web of pleasure Spun by you so strong so clear Will it last is there a measure I want to wake up here!! Part of me wants to jump in, The other part in terror of tear With both feet, so what, I can't swim, What if we end up here!! In one breath I want more than this. what may come from our first kiss, in next breath I start to fear, where do we go from here!!! that was my first one and it was greatly appreciated.... i have just wrote this one... and not yet sent it to her. how can i know, some one i dont know, and yet i know enough, enough to want her! total strangers knowing, more than strangers can, lost in a wave of........................ i dont know, but its washed over me. engulfed by her beauty, lost in her person, longing for her touch, wanting what i cant have, walking in a daze, she is the centre, lost in a maze, im so close. imogenheap says it, like it is, we are kissing, with out kissing, will it be, what we want, want the impossible, is it impossible? would love honest replies. on these. if you think its cheesy say so... if you like it say so.. be brutal if needed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 20, 2006 Share Posted May 20, 2006 Awww that was so cute I don't think is was cheesy at all... Mind you i am a very emotional person. But in my opinion an all round good poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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