Daddy Bear Posted May 20, 2006 Share Posted May 20, 2006 for Lisa keep your tears in a jar for me and hold it for the day i pour them on your velvet skin and kiss them all away put your sobs in a jar for me and have it at your side when i come home i'll open it and throw them to the sky save your love in a jar for me be sure to seal it tight and we will set it near our bed to cast a glow at night Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lita43 Posted May 20, 2006 Share Posted May 20, 2006 I admire people that can think that deep and honestly say that I am sorry for your loss/mourning. The poem was very sad, but sweetly, absorbant, profoundly a pinning for a lady LOVE. Can't say that I can feel the loss of a Lover "By Death'', but know of lost Loves! I need new batteries for this keyboard and is my husbands computer. Got hit big by Trojan Horses and took out my "Systemworks" anti-virus. On my hubby's computer right now and have to start with square 1 on mine. We have 3 networked here. Hope you can find some solice and will try to get back to my own homefront "computer" and take a step further in the realm of poetry. Always, Lita~ Hugs!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted May 20, 2006 Author Share Posted May 20, 2006 my thanks for the kind compliment, Lita... and a little good news: the last i heard, she was still alive and living somewhere in the general vicinity of Oklahoma City. the pining is, fortunately, not the kind brought about by mortal passage... although sometimes it does feel like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted May 21, 2006 Share Posted May 21, 2006 Beautiful. -Empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted May 21, 2006 Author Share Posted May 21, 2006 Beautiful. -Empty.coming from a poet with your talent, i'll take that as a very high compliment. i hope you keep producing your own peerless material for many years to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 Awww that was so sweet! That girl is one lucky girl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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