darkness1235 Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 She says: She says she loves me Then says she does not She says she'll help me Help make the hurt stop She says she's my friend One of the best Knows me the most Helps me the less She says it's my fault That I'm always wrong It's wrong how I think How I sing a song When she looks at me How can she not tell? That I'm crying I'm screaming I'm begging for help Begging her to stop For her to see Her words hurt a lot And they're hurting me I try to hold it in To keep it all inside But I just want to vent Push it all aside I act like everything is perfect Like I'm so happy But why can't people notice it? Why can't they see through me? -TATY- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 20, 2006 Share Posted May 20, 2006 Ok i understand you completely in that situation! I've there oh so many times... Kinda there at the moment really... Anyway that was a great poem and you worded it well! Keep on posting i loved it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted May 20, 2006 Author Share Posted May 20, 2006 Thanx for the comment Rozi, I'm sorry that ur in the same situation, I hope it gets better ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dregnought Posted May 20, 2006 Share Posted May 20, 2006 Hmm.. look's like I'm also joining this club of friends. kinda. Love sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted May 20, 2006 Author Share Posted May 20, 2006 Love sucks. ditto! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koolaidnovel Posted May 21, 2006 Share Posted May 21, 2006 Wow... That's really good... I'm surprised you're only 13! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 Great poem, I loved it. Make that 3 in the club I've been there as well I know the feeling. Remember darkness I'm always here for you, always. ANd not only for darkness you to Dreg and Rozi! everyone and everyone my heart is open. PM or call me, I'm always there. ^_^ Beautiful, powerful poem i loved it Keep posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted May 22, 2006 Author Share Posted May 22, 2006 thanks everybody for all your comments I'm sorry that ANY of you are or have been in this situation I am in it and have been in it and it does suck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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