neva_black_n_white Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 If I could let go - Fall from the sky Do you think your arms would still be open By the time I got down? If I was to jump And reach for your heart Do you think you'd lock the door Or have it open from the start? If I hid away But wanted to be found Do you think you'd walk away Or search all around? If I picked up the rope That you laid down Do you think you'd let me pull you into my world Or would you simply mess me around? If I was to travel - Far and wide Do you think you'd jump on the next train Just to be by my side? If I got in trouble And couldn't get out Do you think you'd be my map Navigate me around? If I did something special If I tried really hard Do you think you'd see me efforts Or would they be ignored? If I was brave And stuck up for what I believed Would you look right through me Or smile proudly? Only I'm sure id have my arms open And my heart would be yours I'd make sure I played hide and seek And fall into your world Id be on the next train And stick by you through thick and thin Id praise you for who you are And be proud of everything .................................................................................................... each colour is meant to represent a new challange. something different. the block (blue at the end, or maybe black, it could be decieving me unifies the importance of having everything..... not to be greedy. *smiles* its just the way a certain emotion comes. all for one and one for all type of thing neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 17, 2006 Share Posted May 17, 2006 Ok that was the sweetest poem you have ever written! I looooooved it soo much! I wish i could ask someone the first part and be answered the second... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 17, 2006 Author Share Posted May 17, 2006 Thanks. I think it drags but its still spesh. smiles. thanks hehe.. (thats a really cute responce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
autumn Posted May 18, 2006 Share Posted May 18, 2006 a beautiful poem. keep writing PLEASE.!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 18, 2006 Author Share Posted May 18, 2006 AWW, muchly appreciated. smiles. and i shall keep writing i do enjoy it hehe neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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