aggierocker Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 A Work In Progress I don't ever know what to think Feeling lost without the flow Its the emptiness in this sink I'd like to fill up this hollow Because the glass is half fuller Although I do thirst for more I'm waiting for sweet nectar I'm too good for ancient cactus Don't wait to hand me the sweetness And I'll just drink it all now One big gulp of life being sleepless Its all mine its all gone Nothing left but sweet satisfcation And a thirst for more and more Left with not a drop of condensation Dehydrating till I hallucinate Imagining rain in my perfected lust While I lie in thorns of heat Licking spacious droplets in the dust Fainting in everlasting bliss I see the spec in the cavern Darkness encompasses the light And I'm deeply lost in the raven But through this small hole of light Its the way out of the fear of mine Because I'm so scared of the night I want a hand to hold me in line Tripping over jagged rocks is painful Fortunately, it has not killed me yet But I stumble woundedly in agony Bleeding pain for predators in a set The smell of fears eats me away And it draws the evils ever closer I need your divine to protect me They're eating me away more deeper It won't let go and it keeps digging Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aggierocker Posted May 19, 2006 Author Share Posted May 19, 2006 Comments are welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 It's a nice and realistic poem. At the same time it makes me wonder if this is how you are feeling now?? Is it?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aggierocker Posted June 25, 2006 Author Share Posted June 25, 2006 See my Guilty And Pissed thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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