EmptySoul Posted May 9, 2006 Share Posted May 9, 2006 I lost myself back there Somewhere And I didn't even notice I was gone I didn't see that my reflection was a little dim Or that my smile was all wrong I didn't feel the cuts I made With the knife, the razorblade I didn't feel the things I gave To all the wanting boys And I can't find myself Because I don't remember where I've been I don't remember what I did But I know I smell like sin I know my hands are shaking But I can't remember why With my fingers in my throat And my mind screaming… It's daytime but it's dark And I'm sleeping In the shadows I'm eating Then I'm purging Until the pain is gone For just a little while I'll stare at my reflection And wonder who I am Bite me bruise me bleed me Rip out my heart And make a mercy killing. -Empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 10, 2006 Share Posted May 10, 2006 I really like that Emptysoul its a really good piece of poetry. Im glad you can express yourself in words like that! I love all the emotion you put into it and you can almost feel your pain through your righting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 10, 2006 Share Posted May 10, 2006 My god that captured me. Its like a confession almost. I love it. I dont think ive really read anything like that before. raw emotion. i like it indeed. a great piece of work... bit of an inspiration giggles** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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