neva_black_n_white Posted May 9, 2006 Share Posted May 9, 2006 Love seems to be this creation - Which we all search to find Its like the only thing wanted By 99% of man kind Its something that keeps us united We all work as a whole Its like two lovers eating - From a shared bowl Something that has to be shared An equal two halves It's loving someone intensely Right from the start It's not something you can describe - No words can explain It can't be an experiment You wont achieve the aim But most of us lose it Take it for granted for a while Some of us get divorced After just reaching the aisle So what makes us use the words - So easily as we do? I don't see why they're no longer precious Simplicity of saying "I love you" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q10 Posted May 9, 2006 Share Posted May 9, 2006 ...you're like a high quality poem machine lol they're all wonderfull :S This is a nice one also, I hate it when people say "I love you" so fast..without the meaning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 9, 2006 Author Share Posted May 9, 2006 Chuckles* i guess im just a person who thinks alot chuckles... or maybe always has something to say *ultra smiles* but thanks. It stresses me out how people use the words so easily, its almost a filler to silence in a conversation or something. People use it like they say.. i like your smile... or nice bottom (i got redded then you know? i dont see why. I wish people treated it as thought its more precious.. used words mean nothing after all. thanks for replying. smiles** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 10, 2006 Share Posted May 10, 2006 Ahhhhhhh i'm so annoyed!!! How did you become so talented??? Don't suppose you wanna teach me do you? I always try but my poems never turn out quite the way i want! But your right love is a very strong word and it should be kept unless you mean it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 10, 2006 Author Share Posted May 10, 2006 Smiles... your little post made me blush lol. but thanks, thats really nice. i dont really have any structure to the way i write, its a little eratic as im sure youve noticed, hehe, but i guess its how i feel so i dont really try... not to rub salt into the wound of me not needing to try *ultra smiles* its my means of venting i guess. thanks though, i like these lil compliments hehe neva x aka kell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
twinklestar Posted May 12, 2006 Share Posted May 12, 2006 I always come back to this part of the forum because of your poems, Kell. I love all of them. You write so well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 14, 2006 Author Share Posted May 14, 2006 Thanks. *really smiles* Thats about the most fabulous compliment anyone could ever get. thankyou. im glad you like to read my poems. smiles**** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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