neva_black_n_white Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Like a heart broken Into so many pieces That they aren't there Shattered with eternity Without a care Without emotion or expression Like a blank dream No hidden catches Twists or screams Where has the emotion gone? Why cant it seem- Seem real any more? Like the best ride at the theme park Open without a queue But your hearts not in it You don't want to go through Through with ride any more Ups and downs It's like spontaneousness Being simply erratic Can't get my head around this Get around all these turns Yet it's just so basic It's like a pool with no water The seaside with no sand Why Why can't I pick up the pieces? But it's not my job Vacancy is taken And you just walk by You leave my shattered heart Walking over it with ease Here I am - forever incomplete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Wow, very touching and creative!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 4, 2006 Author Share Posted May 4, 2006 Thanks. thats my boyfriend for you and im still with him, could you imagine the break up *says jokingly* but yeah, thats how i feel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Sweet that one like like has a train of consesnes feel (wow look at that spelling of Conshusness) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 5, 2006 Author Share Posted May 5, 2006 smiles* thanks. and dont worry i knew exactly what you meant. i really like your responce. i have to agree *smiles, if im allowed to* i think its that consciousness which makes it worse though, you know? neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 Thanks for your poem. Your so talented! I really loved it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 8, 2006 Author Share Posted May 8, 2006 smiles* you seem to have read a few of mine lol. thats cool. thanks for the responce again .. smiles** neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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