neva_black_n_white Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 Look at you standing there - Posing with a smile You gel your hair like of the adds It rains – You run a mile You've got to have the labels The new things "in" Why can't you be original? Get rid of all that "bling" But you stand there with a presense Thinking your better than me I can see you have money A proper eye candy!! So I look a little different Don't fit in with all the mags I'm sorry my clothes don't live up - To your glad rags But I'm quite confidently standing Without a care in the world I don't need to have presense I'm an average jo girl You think you need to be better But it only makes you worse Take a look in the mirror You've set yourself a curse So where's your personality? Amongst all those clothes Maybe it's hidden behind the makeup Or that pathetic false pose ................................................................................................... this isnt really about what people wear... if you wear expensive clothes and gel your hair, its NOT about that, its about a specific person who hides behind it... just someone who caught a nerve thinking they were better than anyone else... hense average jo fair enough theres bright charachters... shy charachters.. everyones different.. but it doesnt make someone better.. you know? anyway, its not there for anyone to take offense.. neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Nice poem, did you dedicated this to someone special!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 4, 2006 Author Share Posted May 4, 2006 chuckles... yeah they know what i think *smiles* i guess a little subtler but pretty straight.. hehe.. im not one for bad karma.. but it had to be said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 Yeah, I no what you mean neva. I know you only put this out for one person but i know several like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 8, 2006 Author Share Posted May 8, 2006 chuckles. ** i just read this again and it makes me giggle.. some people who are like this, just for people responces instead of maybe just liking a certain style stress me out. i have a friend and shes beautiful. but shes one of those people who goes to college, makes no effort, goes as herself (not that thats not any effort but you get the jist) she has proper mates and when it counts for her, she goes out and does look amazing.. but only because she wants to and is not just because she can every day to attract attention and to be better, you know? thats a stresser anyway. thanks for the reply. neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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