AntiLove_SuperStar Posted April 30, 2006 Share Posted April 30, 2006 I'd love it if you took me and Flung me over the back of the couch Gave me a thousand kisses and Put a rose in my distraught red lipped mouth I wake against an inky sky and Sometimes I need your alabaster skin Beside me and your hot breath against My throat, the love-hate line is thin I'm the new white knight and I've never faced a challenge so strange Take back those thousand kisses Done with them and now starving for change Sleeping soft with my own inky sky and Never do I need your swirling hazel eyes That intricate bitter love-poison on My tongue, I love saying my goodbyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the yang to the worlds yin Posted April 30, 2006 Share Posted April 30, 2006 I love your word usage and description in this. It's really great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted April 30, 2006 Share Posted April 30, 2006 I like the ending a lot it runs well line throw line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 1, 2006 Share Posted May 1, 2006 I really like that poem. passionate! smiles* i really like your wording and technique on this one.. smiled at the manipulation and diversity of it... (well my interpretation) chuckles* i really liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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