neva_black_n_white Posted April 25, 2006 Share Posted April 25, 2006 a bare room simply nothing there with a lack of emotion i stand and stare i dont believe im meant to think only im not allowed to speak all your intentions - are to make me feel weak but i hold up my posture be it without a smile i wont fall down not for a long while i stand here and wait for your return. a punishment ill get but i shall learn the door opens you swing it back hard i close my eyes for a moment - wonder whats on the cards you whipser in my ear "what a good girl ive been" "stoud up for your master" "take it your keen!" my lips tremble but i refuse to cry he tears down my top the pain - of wishing to die ...................................................i still need to finish this, sorry ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suicidal_angel Posted April 26, 2006 Share Posted April 26, 2006 That is such a gud poem i was almost in tears at the end! Thanks for sharing it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 26, 2006 Author Share Posted April 26, 2006 thanks for the reply.. i didnt realise it would have such an effect. but im glad it had some depth. smiles* muchly appreciated. neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 25, 2006 Share Posted June 25, 2006 Very creative poem and yet so real that the melancholoy on it, amkes you think for a while. Thanx for sharing it!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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