Spugly Fuglet Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Dream Last night you came to me again In sweet shadows your feet did walk, I no longer feel sharp that pain As you and I in sleep did talk. I said to you those words of old, lost for ever in the frost of time. But I forget your hart is cold, that you jailed me for my crime. In to everlasting darkness I was thrown Never again to hold or kiss you face, You hold me still even in dreams to atone For my life long disgrace. ©InSightFull.ltd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
007 Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 That is a magnificent poem, man. Congratulations on your writing ability; and it is great that you do not let your dyslexia hold you back on such creative endeavors! -007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
itsallgrand Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 That's beautiful. That's a poem that truly sings in the ears. I hope you recite this one day: This poem needs to be spoken! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SxcLady Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 Thats like one of best poems ive read!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StrangeFellow Posted April 24, 2006 Share Posted April 24, 2006 Absolutly beautiful, shall stay in my mind for quite a long time, thank you. Keep it up, Strange Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted April 24, 2006 Author Share Posted April 24, 2006 Thank you so much for your kind words, I wrote Dream in 1996, even now it makes me cry to read it out. My wife says I should put all my poems down in a book. Who knows if I can make some good ones I my well do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spugly Fuglet Posted May 6, 2006 Author Share Posted May 6, 2006 I do not cry when I read this now I think I could finally be over her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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