neva_black_n_white Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Stuck in a dilemma No words can describe All these times I've wanted to find my emotions This time I want to hide I don't see why It's happening What more can I do? Always making everyone happy This time I'm without a clue Holding onto all these expressions And no where to hide I try to close all the doors - Push this aside Why do you feel the way you do? What do you expect me to say? I try to make you happy But not this way You hold out your arms And with trust you expect me to fall I know your something special But you're not my wonder wall I have someone I love Without a doubt I can say Yet you try to tempt me with your friendship That's just not fair play I wish I could help you Maybe there's something more I can do But I know one thing for sure I can't help not loving you too .................................................................................................................................... .....its a little rough around the edges, i tried rewording, but i guess this is how i want it to be for now. when its not emotion and just a poem ill rewrite it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emotional Posted April 23, 2006 Share Posted April 23, 2006 i like it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 26, 2006 Author Share Posted April 26, 2006 thanks. i dont think its very good personally. its just a bit of a dilemma someone put me in thats all. feelings dont always flow thow, do they. thanks for the reply. neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 you need to put all your poems together, organize a time line or something, like a story for the reader to be taken throughout and let ALL the world see how easy you make it look. It's really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted May 3, 2006 Author Share Posted May 3, 2006 smiles** could indeed be a good idea. im not sure whether i have all of my work.. sometimes it frustrates me and i get rid of them, but i think it could be worth doing - even if its just a scrap book... could be something important to me later i guess... pretty special idea. thanks x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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