scootermojo Posted April 18, 2006 Share Posted April 18, 2006 Insidious eye of your screenplay twitches While choosing your unwitting flavor of the season Abandoned from the opening act Liquor fueled participation and epilogue Infected in a tide of dipsomaniacal reason Liquidated the first lamb Abdicate and astray on the second chance Soon to be shunned by the descendent Of the scarlet letter In eidolon dreams you said, "goodbye" It's your parable, it is what it is Attenuated beyond repair, However mephetic and pestilent It's simply neither here nor there Circumvent the destitute mother By throwing out the one of two faces Dependent effeminate stares into the bottle Staring like a broken zombie Unable to comprehend the emptiness while baby bears child Two in front of ten by two thousand Capricious and negligent eyes to the sky Infanticide "Why, oh why, oh why?" Relinquish and savor the now deprived from a distance? Malevolent indifference not emphatic humanity as elucidated The tangled charade, a facade, has unfolded on yet another Of a long list of many who know the truth Congenial illustrations no more need be erected Why don't you just admit it? Will you ever admit it? No stories are being assembled, maladroit and ineffectual, Is there nothing valorous to foster? Part vampire, part carnivore Amalgamated Mephistophelian and malicious philosphies Voyeuristic profligated alley cat "promiscuity" Sing in arrogant obstinance to those that abhor Based on fact and truth Excuses, nouns and defensive rhetoric distract no one For it's commonly asserted to being a... ...a label fittingly heard both before and after! La-la-la-li-li-lie...it's all that's been composed I and others have protected and sustained all that we've produced Could you make the same claim? Could the atrocities ever be admitted? Denial still lurks Angles in the hearts of many will not be deceived The broke Hindi God will never forgive and The immorial matriarch cannot be hidden from the celestial and jaundiced glare Prostitute yourself to whoever listens to your feeble fiction Fruad rooted in all the contaminated venom concocted By the untruthful and dirty mouth Relegated to comprimising never existent hypocritical principles, Harlot of the evening Lift your head out of their laps Whose turn is it this time? The truth you try to drown by devouring the phallic Pains beyond comprehension Stop running away from the emptiness abandonment of infancy Seeking jealous revenge on those more fortunate Eternally deemed everlastingly hostile and impersonal Inhuman, manipulative, audacious Pretentious, pompous arrogance, outwardly fake and misleading Diabolical charlatan souse begat from womb of souse Devour to compensate for past inadequacies Absurd and smug celebration of the epoch While no one else shares the enthusiasm Humanity recoils at the thought of your nativity Shared by the progenitor and kindred Repentless of the iniquity...extinguished the cherub Duplicitous liasons that break honor never embodied "God's grace" monniker, an ill applied name An injustice to those who coined the label in the name of nobility You only feed the tragedy Augmenting the blood to the ghost of the antecedent Vicariously, I laugh while the agony escalates So much better and deserving, you than I Just admit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ocrob Posted April 19, 2006 Share Posted April 19, 2006 Hi Scooter, I read your poem once, then decided to read it another five times. I think of myself as having average intelligence and I just did not understand it. I used to write a lot of poetry, but it was pretty basic and not anything of your magnitude. Your writing seemed extremely intelligent, but seriously made no sense to me. I am guessing you have a very large IQ, but I do not. The vibe I got was that it was very conservative and discouraging bad acts or something like that. The first time I read it, I was very impressed. I then read it to try to understand it. I could not undertant it at all. It is obvious that you have a great vocabulary, but I sure can not keep up with that. Can you give me the 19 year old summary in terms of dude and like and whatever? I am definitely not saying it was a bad poem because I was so impressed, but it escaped my intelligence. I may not be as intelligent as everyone on here or not have an IQ of your caliber, but I would love to understand. Your poem sounded very intelligent, but it also sounded very dark, but I did not get it. Please explain and thank you for that amazing talent. That was awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scootermojo Posted April 19, 2006 Author Share Posted April 19, 2006 ocrob, thanks for the compliment. to be honest, there are only two people who would get that poem and that's me and the girl that it's about who i used to be involved with so it's understandable that you wouldn't understand the meaning...nobody would except for her and i. still, though, you were right about it being about somebody who has acted badly...if you knew her story you would agree completely. i write alot but haven't lately but i heard the new tool song, vicarious, and was inspired especially since her birthday is coming up. 3 or 4 of the lines are almost direct quotes from the song athough changed somewhat to fit into the context of this poem. some may say it's plagarism...so be it but some of those lyrics inspired me to write this. our relationship has been done for just about a year but she continued to cause problems for me up until about two months ago. this was just a way to vent for me. i was going to send it to her because it would make her so mad and it would be nice retribution for what she did and has been doing after i called it off but i decided to just be mature and post it here instead for others to read and comment on it. as far as what it's about...she's just a bad person...the most despicable person i have ever met in my life and that's bad because i have met some bad people. for the vocabulary...yes, i have a decent vocabulary but not as good as what this poem illustrates. since she has a great vocabulary (she was an english major) and since this started out as me planning on sending this to her i had to be both subtle so no one else would understand it except for her but also wanted to use more illustrative words to "paint" the picture the poem was painting instead of just "alcoholic, liar, horrible mother, cheater" etc. this may sound more harsh in print than if i was actually saying it to you but if you don't understand some of the words then look them up. i do that sometimes when i'm looking for something different to describe something and also when i'm reading something and don't understand a word i read. i find it fascinating the multitude of words and synonyms we have in the english language and doing so both increases my vocabulary and helps me illustrate things in different ways. in fact, you could find out her name if you look up some of the stuff i had in there. "god's grace" is what her first name means and hindi god is the meaning of her first son's name that she abandoned. thanks again for the compliment. take care, scooter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ocrob Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Keep writing bro. I will study the dictionary and try to get to the level to understand. lol What matters is the fact that you expressed yourself and took the time to do it. Good job. Robert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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