neva_black_n_white Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 why is it that you do this daddy? why do you let her cry? were meant to be your angels daddy have you passed that by? why is it that you do this daddy? scream out with a sting? is it because were flawed daddy? angels with no wings? why is it that you do this daddy? shout out with a blow you know she wont fight back daddy she just leaves through the door why is it that you do this daddy? where does this temper errupt? she feels like a failure at times an angel being corrupt why is it that you do this daddy? i know you cause no pain but do you know she hurts at times? verbal abuse cant be tamed! why is it that you do this daddy? why is she in her room? shes up against the door now daddy singing of her doom why is it that you do this daddy? cant you hear the music blare? its all about death and suicide what if theres a subliminal message there? why is it that you do this daddy? i promise that she tries she does the little things you dont see but you think theyre lies why is it that you do this daddy? your angels really there cant you give into this power? go and comfort her upstairs! why is it that you do this daddy? why cant it be to me? if only she would speak out then maybe you would see why is it that you do this daddy? i wish youd heard her words one day she told me she wanted to be a crayon white- to fade into the world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 OH MY GOD! I almost cried reading this. I can totally relate to it...sadly from both sides mom and dad. You left me without words just... I love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 17, 2006 Author Share Posted April 17, 2006 Thanks. i guess i just felt like it should be said. everyone feels it to diff magnitudes. well not everyone. but im glad you liked it. im sorry it hit home so much though neva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 Thanyou so much for witing that poem! Me too was practially in tears and also can relate in my own different way! That is a truly inspiring poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 18, 2006 Author Share Posted April 18, 2006 Thanks. I really appreciate it. Im glad im not alone on this one. *smiles* i dont want to portray my dad as a horrific man, he isnt at all... hes my world.. but its sad that maybe he doesnt treat every one of my sisters or in this case my twin the same. Cuts deep. Anyway, lets not go into too many details.. Thanks for the responce, neva x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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