Daddy Bear Posted April 14, 2006 Share Posted April 14, 2006 you are the sunlight and i--just a moon when you're in front of me i lose me in you when you are smiling it lights up the world i exist to reflect you my beautiful girl but i am earthbound i can't stop spinning 'round i feel your warm irresistible charm a release from my pain take me away from here save me from bondage come to me, sunshine i call out your name i long to be in you knowing the whole of you engulfed in magnificence to burst into flame it seems like you're next to me surrounded by stars it's hard to believe, my love you're so very far yes, i am dark at times but you make me full you are my destiny who wouldn't be pulled? yet i am earthbound i must keep looking down i sense your warm and benevolent glow and it tears me apart so soft and innocent mother of everyone jewel of the universe it is who you are the center of gravity sitting there quietly oh, how i could melt in you deep in your heart i am nothing... lonely, orbiting, vacant, eternally sorrowful... every moment... i love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boricua7 Posted April 14, 2006 Share Posted April 14, 2006 Wow. This is a beautiful poem. Is this to an ex? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jorus Cbaoth Posted April 14, 2006 Share Posted April 14, 2006 Very nice. The first two lines are the best, in a metaphorical sense. "you are the sunlight and i--just a moon" I'm assuming you idolize this girl, seeing as how the moon get's it's light from the sun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted April 14, 2006 Author Share Posted April 14, 2006 thanks, peeps. not quite an ex, because she had a crush on me when i was married/buried and i fell hard for her right about the time she wrote me off. and yes, i still idolize her so much it half chokes me sometimes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheRedQueen Posted October 4, 2006 Share Posted October 4, 2006 projectile vomiting, please excuse my cyber-chunks hvgkgl;u;i[u;ihlkbmfcgdhjtfkhiouyi;jhk;.nm. kjh;jk'[pio[pip'k;'k'LK''l;' : 'k'p;'[o bloojkhj0pbloojho bl;lkoiuu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows Light Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 Very nice... flows beautifully... and i love the way you centered it on a page.. made me scroll up and down the page because it almost reminded me of the shapeliness of a woman. So where is she today??? Is she married? Lost? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daddy Bear Posted October 5, 2006 Author Share Posted October 5, 2006 SL, what happened was that she became a lesbian (i know; you can relate). the last actual news i heard of her was that she was on suicide watch in a hospital after attempting to take her life, though i do presume that she was released after a time. we never had a serious relationship together. i occasionally pause to wonder if both of our lives might not have been brighter if we had. to my knowledge she has never seen the poem, nor would she likely be impressed. thanks for the nice review, SL. tomato at my good friend TRQ for bumping this best-forgotten glucosefest, composed well over a year ago, out of April's archives. :splat: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant_to_love Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 What a Beautiful Poem!! it reminds me of my ex and I. Thanks for sharing it. : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms. Babydoll Posted October 5, 2006 Share Posted October 5, 2006 very nice poem, never read anything like it, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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