neva_black_n_white Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 So much of you is tainted No reflection of the truth The interpretations are gold But its all there to loose I watched you in ore What were you to do? You just looked at me Then around the room You take a razor To slice fine lines into the art I didn't see the meaning But it WAS from the heart I stood back and stared Took a look at the work The art still strived As though its not hurt With those eyes You held me a gaze With the expression I saw it wasn't a phase Where was the metaphor? What did you want me to see? How much were you hurting? Do the cuts run deep? People seem to think Its all about whats there The surface The tension The evidence a' flare With you it's the opposite You want it to run deep Its not about the visuals Its about the release Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 Are you kidding? that's a GREAT poem. But yeah, I never post my good ones online either. I'm saving them for... something. But I really liked how you got specific, not just aiming generally at mankind as I thought you were going to do as I started to read your poem. You see, that's what we like to read- things more real, even if just to capture a moment. Whatever it is you wanted to capture, trust me- I felt it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 15, 2006 Author Share Posted April 15, 2006 Thanks. Im always scared of exposure thats why mine tend to be quite vague.. i just writ one though, tried explaining it... lets see if that works.. smiles.. but thanks for the responce. smiles* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 I loved it also. If that's not one of your good ones then the others must be GREAT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 17, 2006 Author Share Posted April 17, 2006 smiles** thanks hehe, its like compliments all round .. yay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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