blueangel Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 I can't seem to hold your face inside In my mind, you are disappearing A death behold- it holds you there A heart can see but to see it clear I can't- I have to stop Stop chasing me with your shadows And the memory of you Stop making it hit me All the things I was so used to Stop putting dreams inside me That confuse and twist my mind I can't seem to put a stop to it Not this time Stop leaving your scent on Monday afternoons Stop letting me sense where you are in the room I don't want to feel your touch- I don't want to know Please stop, your memory- it is time to go. I've tried before to see what's true You grabbed my wrist Invisibly- was that you? Left bruises all down it As you made me throw my pencil out The window- I saw your face That was long ago but something shows When I am writing, I feel you glow Watching me- saying how proud But the room is empty when I turn around The skies above- when will they stop? When will you disappear? I know it's all now in my thoughts And we're both lost in here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SxcLady Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 WOW thats good. Is it about a partner or family member or just a friend?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted April 11, 2006 Author Share Posted April 11, 2006 deceased step mom- very true Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SxcLady Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 Its beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted April 12, 2006 Author Share Posted April 12, 2006 I know. I know. What can I say? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SxcLady Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 Do you write a lot of poetry? Only just noticed how old you are aswell. The best piece of poetry I have seen is a poem by my friend, after my aunty passed away. And my friend was 21 and I thought no one else could write like him!!! LOL your 15 and this is at about the same stage! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted April 12, 2006 Author Share Posted April 12, 2006 Do you write a lot of poetry? Only just noticed how old you are aswell. The best piece of poetry I have seen is a poem by my friend, after my aunty passed away. And my friend was 21 and I thought no one else could write like him!!! LOL your 15 and this is at about the same stage! I grew up fast. I read a LOT in my childhood and was sort of an outcast. I'm not that alone now but the knowledge I have aquired through that has paid off. Also- God- what I live for- that inspires me, opens a door to greater achievement it appears. Thanks for noticing though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SxcLady Posted April 12, 2006 Share Posted April 12, 2006 yeah its really good. Congrats on the great poetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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