neva_black_n_white Posted April 8, 2006 Share Posted April 8, 2006 I tried thinking Of what words I would use The sentences and emphasis Id put on you I analysed the connotations And knew all the interpretations What type of person are you? And from what generation? Do you think you're the good? Or maybe the bad? Do you think you're pure? Or used and "had"? What phrases do you think Ive put together? Are they dumb? Or maybe clever? Think about yourself Before I tell the world Think about the way you behave And what you think ive told? Do you think ive said your compassionate? Do you think Ive said you care? Do you think ive said I believe in your honesty? No broken promises – your always there? Maybe you think ive said your sarcastic? A player of the cards? Maybe you think ive told them your negative? Pessimistic? Live to break hearts? So answer me this question Whilst I sit out in the cold Do you think – if you were a pack of cards That id play or fold? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Vacancy Posted April 9, 2006 Share Posted April 9, 2006 Neva, that's a wonderful poem! I particularely like this part, it's a good use of words... So answer me this question Whilst I sit out in the cold Do you think – if you were a pack of cards That id play or fold? Great poem, keep up the good work. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 12, 2006 Author Share Posted April 12, 2006 Smiles* thanks my converse fwend.. oh how mine are grey.. and white but again grey haha... so close to that pic. But thanks. I appreciate the comment.. i do like to play on words *smiles* do you write poetry? neva aka kell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StrangeFellow Posted April 13, 2006 Share Posted April 13, 2006 Very very good, the card medaphor is genius! Keep up the excelent writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 13, 2006 Author Share Posted April 13, 2006 Thanks StrangeFellow i appreciate the responce. *blushes* i am beginning to feel like an artist *chuckles and puts on a smart "arty" pose hehe* My bf is a tricky one, maybe ill do a sequal to the result .. chuckle.. if i was to deal you - as a separate hand id place you as a king of hearts a card that looks quite "grand" a man with compassion and a heart full of gold i know you flirt with your queen but its no reason to fold you come high in a run and we look good as a pair its a shame about the gender issue but well pretend its not there maybe something a bit jokey like that... i guess i can hack being a king for a day.. jokes.. (that is sooooo not meant to be a poemy piece, just a joke lol) see you round mr x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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