troublegal05 Posted March 17, 2006 Share Posted March 17, 2006 So what. I took your prized possession of a life not of your own. Together we were Us. One in whole, two loving souls. I remember that last week, you called me at my mourning hours. With your voice heightened to the sound of my own. Two Children laughing at life's significance. Breathing to excitements song. I could feel my heart palpitate with your every tone. I can hear it now, thumping through my chest, thumping through my chest. My hands run cold with sweat just at the thought of us meeting once more. But like an addicts high, all the hype would die. Was it all a lie? loves smoldering persuasion burns and blinds the eyes.... Then four days passed without a single call. Who is she? Was she everything I was not? Your acting as if I didn't know. I'll keep silent, as to not let you know, this hurt. Your voice fades to its own beat, its own tone. Something I had never heard before. Why the sudden change? I'll node my head and agree but you'll never know it to be me the one to then agree...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coollady1957 Posted March 17, 2006 Share Posted March 17, 2006 I tried to read your poem, but the green was so green that it tends to be fuzzy and unreadable. Maybe its partly my eyesight, but I tend to lean toward the bad choice of colors on your post as the reason. Maybe you could edit it and change the color to something more readable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted March 19, 2006 Share Posted March 19, 2006 I love it keep up the good work! It expressed the feeling well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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