neva_black_n_white Posted March 9, 2006 Share Posted March 9, 2006 Do you think you can hit me? Kick me when I'm down? Think you can push me of this thrown? And put on my crown? Do you think this peda stool Is too high for me? Preferring me to be - Down on hands and knees? Do you think my dreams Are far from out of sight? Do I bring you pleasure With all these tears at night? Do you think an ambition Can be set and gained? Or is it more of a bargain A hope framed? Take all of my goods And put them out for sale Let the hammer hit down And rid of all these tails How ironic, I'm not rid Lost to your - higher bid? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted March 9, 2006 Share Posted March 9, 2006 Whoohoo!!!! My favorite poet is back. This one really struck with me. Reminds me of a situation I've gone through, being held down from dreams by others. But our own strength represents a higher bid in the end. You're usual remarkable stuff kiddo. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hosswhispra Posted March 10, 2006 Share Posted March 10, 2006 nbnw- Very powerful writing....you're very good at conveying your thoughts through words. hosswhispra Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted March 10, 2006 Author Share Posted March 10, 2006 Thanks guys there some real complements! I guess i was feeling a bit off key yesterday. Half the time its the only thing i can do with my emotions - write them down - im not one for sharing. Well only with a select few *smiles* Kell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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