becallamjr Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 Essense of Chaos In darkest of moments with dying light nothing to hold onto, in pain and rage Powerless against its will nowhere to hide nor can you run In hatred harness its strength torment and suffering trying to resist Fear becomes power and courage is meek succumb to its will and ye shall be spared Courage and bravery become empty and all that is known becomes blurred Do not hold back for it has taken over destroying everything in its path A force with a will that is uncanny like no other, it cannot be stopped A cold-blooded killer, the rules are gone become one with its essense or fall victim -WECJR.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 That was deep and interesting. Nice poem. Though, do we really want to give into Chaos? Or do we want to fight it? Is it peace or surrender? Just raising some questions. Hope you are doing well buddy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
becallamjr Posted March 7, 2006 Author Share Posted March 7, 2006 Well the chaos is my bipolar disease. Either accept it and surrender and die, or fall victim and suffer. Never ending battle. This was the last poem I ever wrote, posted it on link removed, great stie by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Siraf Posted March 7, 2006 Share Posted March 7, 2006 Deep powerful poem. I posted there too! Great site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted March 8, 2006 Share Posted March 8, 2006 Doh! I should have made that connection. It is a never ending battle. But maybe there is a third choice? Fight and overcome? I'll take a look at the site. Maybe you'll be seeing some of my work on their. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
becallamjr Posted March 8, 2006 Author Share Posted March 8, 2006 Fight and overcome? I may have considered that at some point, but I write my greatest poetry when I'm in a manic episode. Usually I don't know that I am actually in a manic episode till it's over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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