darkness1235 Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 Everlasting misery death while still alive everyday reminded that I want you by my side To know that you have touched this skin whose veins the blood flows through the blood I have in front of me my pain because of you Because of you now I am dead inside my shriveled heart my tears flowed down my shattered face the day that we once part Today those tears flow down my face long after that same day as long and hard as meaningful those little words you say You know I loved You know I cared You know how much you meant wasn't that enough wasn't I did you mean all that you said Now all those loving memories flow all around my head and along with all those memories those lovely words you said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted February 23, 2006 Author Share Posted February 23, 2006 Feel free to say what you think...is it good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PassionatePices Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 I like it! That's how i felt when the ex dumped me. I'm sitting here laughing at myself for getting upset the way i did. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moon Goddess Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 I love it, it's great has alot of emotion and strong feelings and I have felt that way many times before Keep on posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 I know just how that feels, the pain of not being with one you love and gave your heart to. Though it does get better. Good job. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buli Posted February 24, 2006 Share Posted February 24, 2006 My goodness darkness, I'm 28 and you've brought tears to my eyes. Your words hit right there.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 That was an amazing poem! I can totally relate to it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted August 1, 2006 Author Share Posted August 1, 2006 thank you, my sister wrote it i dont know what was in her head Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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