justwonderingkid Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 it was just one year ago i wish i could go back i let you go, thats my regret back then i was so whack but then i made it worse, had feelings for your friend turned out she thought she liked me things with us began to end months later me and her were done and i just pushed on i began to realize what i did both of you were gone now im wishing i had you i know just what i lack i lack your love and comfort i really want you back... exactly my thoughts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justwonderingkid Posted February 23, 2006 Author Share Posted February 23, 2006 what do you guys think of this poem? good, bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PassionatePices Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 It is good.I liked it! Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 Nice job justwonderingkid. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkness1235 Posted February 23, 2006 Share Posted February 23, 2006 It was very good...I liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 It was awesum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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