blu87ro Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 I used to believe in magic, But you made me feel the tragic. Now I'm sinking in deep fear, And it's all your fault,dear! I don't have the courage to fly anymore, I'm trying,but it's not like before Because despair has no wings And in my heart I sense stings. Because of you I'm trembling, I'm scared and I'm falling. My life is like an endless nightmare And I'm breathing poisoned air. There are ghosts in my head As I sit alone in my bed, They come out of the gloom. They are using death's perfume. They induce so much pain, My soul and my strength they drain. All the time I feel haunted I hear darkness's cry shouted. Why have you done this to me? Why can't I be free? Why cant't I be stronger? I want to suffer no longer! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 Sorry for your pain, nice, descriptive poem tho - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaMadHatter Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 Great poem blu, i found it really helps the healing process to take all your emotions and use them for something constructive like music, poetry, art. I can almost feel your pain in your written words. Please continue to bless us with your wonderful words, eventually your poems will turn to thoughts of hope, happiness, and well being. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 Blu, that was desrciptive and beautiful. It is an agonizing feeling when someone has hurt you, it seems like day is dark and nothing is right. But you are strong and you will get through. Hang in there. And thanks for sharing your poety, its a great way to express these feeling. Keep writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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