AwdreeHpburn Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 The longing to be held and to hold Strong the desire to shut out the cold The wanting to see and feel and smell O the words you will utter when its time to tell And then you see him standing there Your heart beats fast as you just stare Your mind races with fantasies and dreams Your body throbs and you plan and scheme Finally you meet but its short without sweet So you find a hole in which to retreat Keep in your mind the way its preferred For only reality makes fantasies blurred Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted February 11, 2006 Author Share Posted February 11, 2006 What? Does that make me sound like a psycho? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 If it makes you sound like a psycho, guess I like psychos. That was nice. Really describes how you feel with a crush, and how when things don't go right, you want to keep the fantasy so you don't feel so hurt. Isn't it nice in fantasy land? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
77streaks Posted February 11, 2006 Share Posted February 11, 2006 hi there, i think it expresses your feelings very well, and in a way i can identify with the moments when i've felt that way, hopeful and yet sometimes the reality of it just seems jarring. sometimes i feel strange writing, poetry or other wise, but the emotions are so thick and its a relief to find the words. Thanks for sharing your poetry keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AwdreeHpburn Posted February 12, 2006 Author Share Posted February 12, 2006 I apologize - I didn't intend to solicit compliments. I just noticed that there were 13 or so views but no comments. I was mostly amsuing myself with the comment that perhaps I appeared psychotic. Sorry - I do appreciate the comments!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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