Cooperstown Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 I think about the life I've had and of the times of bliss One moment stands out most of all, the night that we first kissed The memory strikes me deeply, my heart was flying high Like a rocket ship I went soaring through the sky The tingle that you gave me, the shiver down my spine I knew right from that moment that I had to make you mine Mine for all eternity mine to hold so tight Mine to kiss so softly and gently through the night To laugh with for a lifetime and cry all happy tears To be your knight in shining armor and call all of your fears But these are just my feelings of the first time that we kissed Now I'll spend my lifetime to make sure nothings missed No need will go unmet, that is my promise to you You'll never find a greater love so honest and so true Now all I have to do is find me that girl also its still under revision, any thoughts or ideas let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 I love it. It's upbeat compared to your other poems. I take it you are feeling better now? Took me back to my first kiss. I felt the same way. You will find that girl, just have to be patient until the right time and right girl comes along. Title suggestion: "The Moment." It's that moment that you know she is the one, that moment that touches you and makes you happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cooperstown Posted February 4, 2006 Author Share Posted February 4, 2006 Thanks, good idea for the title. And yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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