neva_black_n_white Posted January 25, 2006 Share Posted January 25, 2006 These tears flow Like a river of broken dreams The sun is lost I see no beam Its like the flowers are wilting The animals ago The trees are withering And no seeds will sow Its like everything is silent No baby can cry Its like every voice has been broken And were all working in mime For once the universe is but a step away But my strides aren't good enough And I'm lead a stray I'm pulled into the darkness The tunnels too deep I walk around oblivious To the depth beneath my feet It's the fires of passion Or maybe hell Wherever I am Its your tell I can feel hands drag accross my body Penetrate my heart Ending this story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 28, 2006 Share Posted January 28, 2006 =D> =D> =D> Love it kiddo. Deep and moving. Like the line about walking around in oblivion. Such a sad and lonely feeling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted January 28, 2006 Author Share Posted January 28, 2006 Thanks shy, muchly appreciated *uber big smile* kell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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